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Wednesday, 20 March 2013

Week 7: Reflection on Computer-Mediated Communication (CMC)


On 19 March 2013, we learned about Computer-Mediated Communication (CMC). Back then, CMC was referred to the communications that occur via computer-mediated formats for example, instant messaging, e-mail, chatrooms and text messaging. Now, the scope is wider. It includes Skypes, Blogs and all form of Social Network Sites (SNS) like Facebook, Twitter and etc. Other researchers have used CMC to refer to a wider scope of communication activities that include e-mail, Internet Relay Chat (IRC), bulletin boards, and World Wide Web.

CMC can be divided into two categories which are synchronous and asynchronous. Synchronous is a real time, instantaneous communication. Synchronous mode of CMC allows the participants to communicate in the same session, thus allowing the rapid exchanges between them. The language used in this mode of CMC is more of spoken conversation. In SCMC, emoticons or smiley, emotes and cryptic language are used. The examples of SCMC are real time chatting nd video conferencing. Asynchronous CMC is a non-real time and non-instantaneous communication. This means that the message is read and responded by others at a later point in time. Thus the participants do not need to be on-line at the same time when the message is being conveyed. Examples of this form of CMC are e-mails, bulletin boards, blogs as well as SNS.

Then, the lecture goes on with the introduction to bulletin board, e-mails and World Wide Web. Some findings on synchronous CMC were presented. Synchronous communication focuses more on content and communicative skills than on form (Leahy (2001:20). This means that people do not really concern on the grammatical errors that are made during the communication because the mistakes do not necessarily point the lack of knowledge of the language. The mistakes can be caused by the nature of this communication which requires more speed, thus shorten the time for people to draft and edit their conversation. This is supported by Sullivan (1998, 52) who sees error corrections as the wrong point of focus in this type of CMC.

By learning about CMC, we come to know that there are two forms of CMC. We are so used to social network sites like Facebook and Twitter, e-mail, blogs and etc. We all know that they are means of communication. We often categorize them as a ‘fast’ or ‘slow’ medium to communicate with people without realizing that they actually a different form of computer-mediated communication. By knowing these two forms of CMC, we can somehow understand why people do not respond immediately on e-mails and other SNS and do not feel angry about the late response, especially if important and urgent matters are involved.

At the end of the lecture, we were given the second graded assignment that consists of two parts. In part 1, we have to make a summary of one empirical research done on CMC. In the second part, we are asked to analyze on a data (synchronous or asynchronous) based on the aspects of linguistics course that we have chosen. Since we are doing phonetics and phonology, we will be analyzing the data based on the stress and intonation of a person in one of the Youtube videos available online.

Wednesday, 13 March 2013

graded assignment 1: lesson plan


LESSON PLAN
                                                                                                                   
Level                           : CFS IIUM students
Time Allocation            : 120 minutes
Venue                          : writing lab
Subject                        : English
Date                            : 13 March 2013
Day                             : Wednesday
Topic                          : How to write a good academic essay
Sub Topic                    :  Topic sentences.




Learning Objectives


At the end of the class, students will be able to know:
  1. Why thesis statements and topic sentences are very important in writing academic essay.
  2. How to generate ideas in writing essay.



Learning Outcomes
At the end of the lesson, students should be able to:

1. List down all the topic sentences from article that have given by teacher
2. Distinguish the topic sentences and the inferences.
3. Understand the importance of thesis statements and topic sentences in writing academic essay
4. Write a very good academic essay.
Teaching aids

Handout of examples of good academic writing, online articles, computer with internet access, software.


Integration of Good Values

  1. Thankfulness towards others deed
  2. Cooperation
  3. Courage
  4. Understanding



Thinking Skills

  1. Arranging and sequencing
  2. Recalling facts
  3. Making association and connection




Set Induction (10 Minutes)
Teacher asks students about their knowledge of thesis statements and topic sentences. Teacher briefly explains how to write a good essay writing specifically focusing on body paragraph. Teacher also will give concise instruction on the lesson for the day.

Procedure
Step 1: (10 Minutes)
1. Teacher gives instruction to the students on how to do 
the task given.
2. Teacher appoints the students to participate in the class activities. Get the students into small group by forming a group consists of four members.
3. Ask the students to go to respective computer with internet access and find an article from website.


Step 2: (20 Minutes)
  1. The students have to read the article and list down all the topic sentences in a paper.
  2. Teacher will guide the students on how to find the topic sentences in the article given
  3.  Teacher asks students to choose three out of topic sentences from the list. They should write down some new ideas about how these topic sentences can generate new topic.

Step 3: (20minutes)
  1. Teacher will give example how the topic sentences can develop new paragraph without plagiarizing it.
  2. Teacher also enlightens the students to use grammar checker so that their sentences are well structured. Here is the software: http://www.grammarly.com/?q=grammar&gclid=CMvxkr25-7UCFZEf6wodAG4Azg
  3. The students also can use software The Sage's English Dictionary and Thesaurus in order to find bombastic words as to write a better essay writing.

Step 4: (40 minutes)
  1. Teacher will ask the students to discuss about their choices of topic sentences and start to write the body paragraphs.



Conclusion

(10 Minutes)
Teacher will ask a few students to tell what they have learnt and the gist of the lesson that day. After that, teacher will conclude the lesson and state the entire main point learned and give the students handout of example in good essay writing.


Follow Up Activities/ Homework
(10 Minutes)
1. Teacher asks students to write a complete academic writing starting from the introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion. All the students have to submit the work individually.
2. Teacher asks the students to do some exercises in 
http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/writing/science/paragraphs/1.2.xml

http://www.uefap.com/writing/exercise/parag/paragex3.htm

http://www3.pef.uni-lj.si/~tuji-jeziki/rp/1_letnik/exercises_on_paragraph_writing.pdf



Evaluation



1)      Evaluation of learning outcome 1
Students need to take out the topic sentences and jot it down in a paper.
2)      Evaluation of learning outcome 2
Ask the students to separate the topic sentences and the inferences or author’s opinion.
3)      Evaluation of learning outcome 3
Point group leader from each group to state the importance of the topic sentences that they have chosen.
4)      Evaluation of learning outcome 4
Ask the students to write 350 words academic essay properly that consists of the topic sentences which are selected.

Teacher’s reflection
1. To make sure the students do understand how topic sentences can develop a very good essay writing.
2. to teach students how to operate the computer.
3. to enhance new vocabulary to the students.







GRADED ASSIGNMENT 1: SUMMARY OF AN EMPIRICAL STUDY ON CALL IN LANGUAGE SKILLS (WRITING)

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
السلام عليكم



This is the summary of an empirical research on CALL in language skills. Among the five skills in language learning, we have chosen the writing skill. Below is the original research paper as well as the summary of the research paper:


Cullen, J., Stephen, B. R., & Catherine, L. F. (2008). Using software to enhance the writing skills of students with special needs. Journal of Special Education Technology, 23(2), 33-44. Retrieved from http://210.48.222.80/proxy.pac/docview/228533347?accountid=44024

OBJECTIVE

The objective of this study is to find out whether computer software would help students with special needs in improving their skill in writing.

STATEMENT OF PROBLEM

Many students with special needs face difficulties in writing, specifically in spelling, written expression, punctuation, capitalization, and organization. There were many researches have been conducted regarding the writing performance of students with special needs. MacArthur, Graham, Haynes, and DeLaPaz (1996) found that students with special needs were two to four times more likely to have spelling errors than their general education peers. Mayes, Calhoun, and Crowell (2000) found that 65% of 119 students referred to a clinic for suspected learning disabilities had a written expression disability, twice the percentage of students who had a disability in reading, math, or spelling. In addition, Brooks, Vaughan, and Veminger (1999) found that for 15 of 17 students with learning disabilities referred for writing intervention, their spelling, composition, and word recognition scores were significantly below their verbal intelligence quotient scores. DeLaPaz (1999) noted that students with learning disabilities were more likely to demonstrate errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and word usage and that their writings were more likely to be shorter and illegible.
Students with special needs are usually put in general education classrooms that would help them with the development of literacy skills, including writing. Technology such as computer software might be beneficial for these students in improving their writing. In this study, the computer software being used are personal computer spell checkers, talking word processors, and word prediction software.

RESEARCH QUESTIONS

The study dealt with a specific question: "What are the effects on writing when a talking word processor with spell checker software is used independently of and in conjunction with word prediction software as accommodations for students with special needs in daily writing exercises?"

SAMPLE

The study was carried out in an elementary school in a diverse, urban school district in Ohio. The participants for this study were seven fifth grade students with mild disabilities who were identified through the evaluations and qualified for special education and related services. These students received services in resource and inclusion classrooms. They were registered in the same fifth grade general education classroom and resource room. Information on students' experience with computers and their performance on producing a computer-generated version of a handwritten essay that was provided to the students were collected from their general education teacher. Students' writing performance was evaluated using a rubric designed by their school district to evaluate several aspects of written expression.

METHODOLOGY

The study was done in the form of case study approach with a modified multiple baselines. The data were presented in table form in order to make the reading easier. The study contained three phases: baseline, intervention using a talking word processor, and intervention using word prediction software in conjunction with a talking word processor. The writing samples of the students were obtained during the participating district's mandated daily writing assignment. This study involved collecting qualitative data through field notes and interviews, conducted by the first author, to get the participants' views on the use of software accommodations.

Procedure

There are three phases involved in this study. In the baseline phase, three handwritten writing samples from each participant were collected over a one-week period. The instructions in this phase that was provided in the general education classroom and resource room are mainly focusing on how to construct and edit handwritten products.
The second and third phases (the intervention phases) were done in three weeks for each of them, with a maximum of nine writing samples being collected from every participant in each phase. In Phase Two, students used Write:Outloud Version 3 (1993-1998), a talking word processor with spell checker function computer software program. The direct instruction on how to use the software was given in the resource room. This phase requires the students to work through a mock assignment with the teacher. At the end of the instruction, students were given 10 minutes to try out the software. On the next day, students received a brief reminder of how to use the software. Students then used the software for their daily journal writings in both the general education classroom and the resource room. They were given choices whether to do a new written sample each day or to edit their product from the day before. It was not allowed for the students to take more than two days on a single sample. This is just to make sure that at least two or three writing samples can be collected from each student per week.
After three weeks of using only Write:Outloud, the word prediction program Co:Writer 4000 Version 4.1 (1992-2003) was added to the intervention for Phase Three. In this phase, Write:Outloud was used in-tandem with Co: Writer. Direct instruction on using the software was received in the resource room.The students used both software programs in their daily journal writing for the three weeks in Phase Three. During Phases Two and Three, students wore headphones to hear the audio feedback.

Instruments for data gathering

The instrument being used during data gathering were the Write:Outloud Version 3 (1993-1998), the word prediction program Co:Writer 4000 Version 4.1 (1992-2003), as well as the handwritten writing samples from each participant for baseline, second and third phase.

Instruments for data analysis

The data were analyzed by calculating the mean number of words, mean number of misspellings, mean accuracy percentage, and mean total rubric score per writing sample and across each participants total writing samples in each phase, which were presented in tables. Number of words refers to the sum of words and abbreviations in the sample. Number of misspelling refers to the sum of words that were spelled incorrectly in the sample while the accuracy percentage refers to the sum of correctly spelled words in the sample. The total rubric score refers to the mean score obtained on the sample based on the district writing rubric which was scored by the student’s homeroom teacher, the student’s special education teacher, and the elementary literacy coach.

Other than that, the field notes and interviews, conducted by the first author in order to obtain participants' views on the use of software accommodations were used.

FINDING

The performance of the students in writing was observed in group and individually in terms of the number of words, number of misspellings, accuracy of words and total rubric score.

(i)           Group performance

As a whole, the students improved during the second and third phase.

Number of words. The group mean for the number of words during baseline increased from 47.06 words to 50.00 words with Write:Outloud, and to 52.32 words with Co: Writer. Five students progressed in the number of words written from baseline to Co:Writer. Two students (David and Jesse) did slightly better with Write:Outloud than with Co:Writer. However, the number of words decreased from baseline for Kari and Bethany,no matter what software was used.

Number of misspellings. The group mean for misspellings during baseline decreased from 6.09 to 2.44 with Write:Outloud.  The group mean decreased again to 2.10 with the use of Co:Writer. For all seven students, the number of misspellings decreased from baseline compared to Write:Outloud and from baseline compared to Co:Writer. The number of misspellings for three of the students (David, Kari, and Bethany) decreased when using Co:Writer as compared to Writer:Outloud, while the rest of the students had less misspellings with Write:Outloud than with Co: Writer.

Accuracy of words. The accuracy percentage for the whole group during baseline increased from 87.07%, to 95.11% with Write:Outloud, and 95.98% with Co:Writer. Every student increased in accuracy from baseline to Write:Outloud and from baseline to Co:Writer. Five students increased in the correctness of the words from Writer:Outloud to Co:Writer, while the other two students (Pat and Jesse) to some extent decreased between these phases.

Writing rubric scores. The mean total group score on the writing rubric during baseline was 9.38 out of 20 points. It increased to 9.90 with Write:Outloud, and 11.25 with Co:Writer. Four students (Aaron, Pat, Kari, and Bethany) increased in total rubric score between baseline and Write:Outloud, but three (David, Daniel, and Jesse) decreased. Six students increased their mean rubric scores between baseline and Co:Writer, but one student's score (Daniel) decreased. Six students also increased their scores between Write:Outloud and Co:Writer, but one students score (Bethany) to some extent decreased.

(ii)               Individual performance

David
David improved in all areas from baseline to Co:Writer. His total rubric score increased a little from baseline and Co:Writer. Even though David’s total rubric score between baseline and Write:Outloud decreased, he had improved in the number of words, number of misspellings, and accuracy percentage during this phase. David also made improvements between baseline and Co:Writer. In general, the combination of Co:Writer with Write:Outloud  was helpful for him.

Daniel.
Daniel improved in all four areas except in total rubric score. From baseline to Write: Outloud, his number of words increased from 33 to 42 and to 53 with Co:Writer. Number of misspellings decreased from baseline to Write:Outloud.  However, between Write:Outloud and Co:Writer his number of misspelling increased a bit.  Yet, it was still fewer than during baseline. Even though Daniel showed progression in accuracy percentage from baseline to Write:Outloud and baseline to Co:Writer, his total rubric score did not improve in both phases. He decreased by almost one point from baseline to Co:Writer. Because of this, the best software for him was quite uncertain.

Jesse.
Jesse performed better in all four areas when using Write: Outloud and Co:Writer compared to the baseline. His highest total writing rubric score was obtained during the Co:Writer phase. During the Write:Outloud Phase, he greatly improved in three areas. His misspellings were reduced, and his number of words and accuracy percentage increased. Overall, Jesse benefited most with the Write:Outloud.

Pat.
Pat improved in all four areas. He obtained the highest score in the group in accuracy percentage from baseline to Co:Writer with increasing score of 72.77% to 90.65%. His number of misspellings from baseline to Co:Writer was greatly decreased from 10.40 to 4.86. The number of words Pat produced during baseline increased with Write:Outloud, and increased more with Co:Writer. His total rubric score increased by 3.1 points between baseline and Co: Writer. Between Write:Outloud and Co: Writer, it looks like Co:Writer was the most effective software for Pat.

Kari.
Kari showed no increase in number of words in both phases. However, she decreased her number of misspellings, and increased her percentage accuracy and total rubric score from baseline to Co: Writer. The number of misspellings was decreased by two in each phase and her accuracy percentage had also increased from baseline to Write:Outloud, and further improved when using Co:Writer. Kari improved greatly in the total rubric score, with 7.97 during baseline to 8.91 during Write:Outloud phase, and to 10.12 during Co:Writer phase. This showed that Co:Writer was the most useful for Kari.

Bethany.
Bethany improved in the reduction of the number misspellings, increase in accuracy percentage and total rubric score. Her scores in number of words decreased during both phases. It took her longer to finish her writing assignments when using the computer. This has caused her to write fewer words in her writing. Bethany’s number of words and total rubric score increased when using Write:Outloud. While using Co:Writer, her number of misspelled words decreased and her accuracy percentage increased. Thus, it is quite hard to know which software was most suitable for Bethany.

COMMENT

The study might be useful in helping students with special needs in their performance in writing. However, the study has some limitations. The first limitation is that, the study might not be accurate to be generalized to other students with special needs as it only uses a small sample. The scope of the study is limited. It only uses two software, even though there are many software available to be tested in order to find the most effective one. Other than that, the participants are chosen based on learning disabilities and mild mental retardation. Students with other disabilities like the mute and blind students are not included in the study. In addition, the distribution of period for each phase is not equal. The Write:Outloud software was used by the students for six weeks, while Co:Writer was only used for three weeks (Write:Outloud was available to students in both Phase Two and Phase Three). This causes the students to become more contented and skillful with Write:Outloud than Co:Writer. The baseline samples also were collected for only one week as opposed to three weeks in the other two phases.

Future research on the use of writing software for students with special needs has to have a wider scope and cover several areas of studies. To get the comments of the students and the teachers about the software being used can help in explaining the data that are collected. Researchers should compare more computer software related to writing in terms of their user-friendly use and benefits that the students will get from using the software. The study should also focus on a larger sample so that the result of the study would be more accurate and reliable. The study should not only focus on the quantitative method but also the qualitative one.



Monday, 4 March 2013

FIRST DRAFT FOR LESSON PLAN


Aim: using topic sentences to generate new essay topic

Activity: using topic senteces to relate to a story.

Level: matriculation students

Teaching aids: newspaper

Procedure:
1.      Choose any article in the newspaper. Lesson’s article is preferable.
2.      Read the article and list down all the topic sentences in a a paper
3.      Ask students to choose five of topic sentences from the list. Students should write down some ideas about how these topic sentences can  make a new essay writing
4.      Get the students into small group of students which is about 2 or 3 people in a group.. students should discuss their choice of topic sentences, answer and explain their reasoning to each other
5.      Start doing the essay within an hour.

Evaluation:
Time: 20 minutes to read the whole article
           15  minutes to find the topic sentences
           10 minutes to choose the best topic sentences
           15 minutes to brainstorm the idea
          1 hour to write the new essay

Teacher reflection:
To ensure the students are able to write essay in a group and generate new ideas

WEEK 4 - reflection on CALL (LSRWG) PART 2

On February, 28, 2013 the lecture is about the continuation on the CALL in Language Skills LSRWG. The lecture is focus on speaking skill, reading skill, writing skill, and grammar.
As we discuss, speaking skill is not an easy skill to be teach to someone. in order to achieve speaking skill successfully, one need to have the discourse compete in speaking skill. Discourse compete means the person have the ability on how to ask a question and what question can be ask and what is not. This is because sometimes the question is not suitable to be ask towards someone, for instance, when meeting someone who you don't know the question must not be intimate like you have know the stranger in person. We need to respect the personal space.

On the other hand, reading is one skill that is easy to teach. Reading is much more easy than speaking as we know what to teach. Reading skill is the most powerful skills that when we read we tend to have  more knowledge about other thing and not to forget new vocabulary that we can learn. By reading is not just reading a book or magazine but also can be take on account is e-book, e-mail and other electronic media.
In addition, Writing skill is the most commonly investigated skill according to Nuraihan Mat Daud. the writing skill include vocabulary, grammar, register, coherence, cohesion,sentence structure, organization as well as genre.

We need grammar for the other skills to work.